Tuesday, May 11, 2010

Outside My House

The air was cold outside; I puffed out a huge cloud of ice as soon as I stepped out. I felt the warmth in my chest dissolve like evaporating rain in that breath. A short walk to my car and my lungs were frost-bitten; the air was really cold outside.
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2 comments:

  1. BrightenedBoyMay 11, 2010 at 4:04 PM

    I like this. I hope you'll write more prose and more regular entries, giving us some insight into your life.

    Thank you so much for commenting on my blog. How did you come across it?

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  2. Haley SueMay 11, 2010 at 9:57 PM

    Love this. Thanks for sharing.

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